Anticipation

*This is my first poem in a LONG time, so don't be too harsh. :P

**The last stanza was the first one I wrote, the intial order was 3rd, 1st, 2nd, but I thought the 3rd stanza fit much better at the end than at the beginning.

***The last line of the 1st stanza doesn't fit in well, I'm aware, and I won't lie when I say I was TOTALLY lost when trying to rhyme. LOL. Any suggestions on changes there will not go unnoticed or uncredited.

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Whisper words of love into my ear
make me shiver with anticipation.
You're changing my mind for me
escape is my only temptation.

You touch me with your cold hands
and I've just fallen into your arms.
Breathe on my neck, make me crazy
a simple motion sets off my alarms.

Press your lips of deceit against mine
make my heart race faster and faster.
A deep shade of red still lingers there
you've taken over, you're my master.

Briana Coulter
06.10.09

**thank you Nicole for the change in the first stanza. :)**

and thank you to the downraters. you should grow some balls and not be such a jealous retard. :)