The heart.

by vintage darling   Jun 12, 2009


Human soul,
Grief-stricken, tormented.
Human spirit,
Perception, sense-prevented.
Beyond limits of material experience,
Empty pledges of no significance,
To a tortured soul.

Please, remind me;
of those blissful vanishing days,
Blue skies;
Eyes shining in countless ways.
Tossed upon eternal waves,
Exploring the subterranean caves,
With you.

Twilight;
Memories absent on the rising tides.
Morning,
only tinted remembrance presides.
Those trials of yours and mine,
Searching for that crucial sign,
Those were the days.

I look away,
Passing thoughts and skyline longings.
Nothing really there;
Shake away the echo of a girl's aching.
Silly romantic gestures,
A thousand negative exposures,
My deepest secret.

Nobody knew,
One farewell, one single thud
Higher than hope,
perhaps hide it, but it floods.
I built you a home,
But now, I am alone,
Tragedies of the heart.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I'm speechless, wonderfull written, 5/5. Em

  • 14 years ago

    by Rocky

    That poem had alot of emotional depth and good vocabularly. i also like how you used a free rhym scheme in it. but i found it was lacking in rythm. quite a few people dont bother much with rythm but i like to read poems aloud so i consider it quite important thats only my opinion though so you might aswell take it with a pinch of salt. otherwise it was a good poem 4/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This style is something I would strive for if I had the confidence. I love the depth of this poem and the theme penetrates my own heart soul and mind

    THIS IS FRONT PAGE MATERIAL

  • 14 years ago

    by HvN

    This piece was so beautifully written with an amazing vocabulary as well as rhyme scheme.

    I'm not sure if it was what you were after but it somehow brought a few tears to my eyes. I guess I can relate to it in my own way.

    Thanks and great job,

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Beautifully written poem, so expressive and full of emotion. Very well written, flawless flow, read excellently. :)

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