It's time to be afraid.

Ewww......made me sudder, and thats no easy feat. I like how you left alot to the imagination. So much better that way as the mind often sees something much more horrible then when shown something.

Wow, i fell in love with this poem. It is just... amazing.. I loved it and all your poetry is so good.. You done an amazing job!!!!
5/5

This poem was amazing. It really sent chills down my spine, like I could feel the darkness creeping out after me. This really struck a chord with me after reading the book "The Lovely Bones", it's a great read, you should check it out.

Also,

I'll show no mercy, no remorse,
I'll let nature take its course.
It's almost time to play,
It's time to be afraid.

My favorite part of the entire poem. It really sells the idea of someone coming after you, under the guise of playfulness. I like how the title fell in with the last line "It's time to be afraid", but I feel like it would have really pulled it all together if you had been able to incorporate that line in there somewhere at the end. Overall, a great poem 4/5

--Nevi

I wouldn't want to meet someone who thinks this about me... :P

Very nice write, I love your choice of words.
Great job. :)

Very afraid infact, quite a menacing poem, but well written. 5/5