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by Jubb Jubb   Jun 23, 2009


Here i am.
A common man.
None can see the truth of me.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Capitalize your "i" and for being three lines this was very powerful. I do think you could add a lot more, or just put this as a quote, but I still liked what you were saying. But maybe just add to it.

    4/5 from me, God Bless You!

    ~MaryAnne

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