Baby Teeth and First Young Loves

by dollwithafrown   Jul 21, 2009


The air was a slight mixture of
laughter and suspense,
when a smile can make a heart melt;
a picture of fragile innocence.

And upon the sun rising,
flying light upon this day;
a group of souls together,
making memories built to stay.

Scraped knees and broken fingernails,
a few tears shed down soft cheeks;
though all it takes is a hug and a kiss
and the voice when a child speaks.

Bright colours paint a masterpiece;
melodies created through sound
of children dancing lightly
on the solid summer ground.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The imagery, rhyme, and style stand out to make this very outstanding

  • 14 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Second stanza first line, there is a space between 'rising' and the comma.

    Overall this was a well written piece which I enjoyed reading. It is true how such a little smile can just lighten up someones day. A beautiful write full of truth. Keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 14 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    Wow, colorful and delighting. Just capturing and vivid. Like the memories of a past time childhood. Just lovely.
    "And upon the sun rising ,
    flying light upon this day;
    a group of souls together,
    making memories built to stay."
    I love this stanza, its nicely written.

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