I hate it

by Bittersweet Sundown   Jul 29, 2009


I hate the fact that I love you,
I hate it that I still care.
I hate you for knowing this,
I hate that you're not there.
I mostly hate our memories,
That make me cry each night.
I hate how all these come about,
Whenever you are in sight.
I hate how when I see you,
My heart breaks in two.
Yet with all the pieces,
I know I'll always love you.
I hate how life goes on,
When mine just sits in place.
I hate how my world shatters,
Each time I see your face.
I hate how you did this,
Knowing how much I care.
I hate how you just bring me down,
With every little stare.
I hate how you know none of this is true,
Even though I'm hurting you.
I can't hate the fact that,
I'm still in love with you...

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  • 10 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Omg I hate spelling errors lol last line I meant adding extra words makes it longer than you'd want it to be**

  • 10 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Omg I hate spelling errors lol last line I meant adding extra words makes it longer than you'd want it to be**

  • 10 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Hey, I love this poem. Its very well written and the rhythm and rhyme is perfect. Except on this line:

    "I hate how you did this,
    And that you know how much I care."

    The second line kinda throws you off I think you should have it"

    I hate how you did this,
    Knowing how much I care.

    Thats just my opinion, adding extra words make is longer than the you want it to bo. Other than that I love it, very well done.