Climbing Flowers. [Double Haiku]

by Courageous Dreamer   Aug 2, 2009


Club to Club Challenge vs R.T.V.W

Sprouting flowers climb
up tall white lattice fencing
with a secure grasp.

Lavender petals
blanket diamond-shaped spaces
with lilac perfume

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  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Good picture painting imagery in this piece. I so much prefer a double or triple since this form is so short. Nice job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nice images your words give us. Flowers climbing a trelis and giving us their sweet perfume. Well done.

  • 14 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This was stunning in every way. The imagery is brilliant. You are on a role with poems that dazzle.
    Very good.

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Beautiful work Temps, this was very stunning and caught my eye from start to finish. Well-worded beauty that you have portrayed, thanks for posting! 5/5 from me, take care.

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Beautiful, Temps:)

    Nice vocabulary and such nice images you made me see, girlie:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

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