Colour Symbolism

by Melpomene   Aug 10, 2009


When,
Orchid butterflies
peeled your lips
platinum I was
-Mesmerized-
Not by the
remarkable,
but rather;
the stunning
interior which
keeps you alive.

That was then.

Sometimes,
when the sky
alters to emerald
we become entwined;
and cream stars
begin to crumble
allowing we to
dance upon
jade midnights.

This is now.

When the peach
from your face fades
I shall still be
-Mesmerized-
The bronze from your
heart will only help
to keep me alive.
I'll remember that
faithful day when
we danced within
moonlight -

composed yet combined;
as we lay to rest
for eternity
by each others side.

That will be then.

and this is still now.

These are the colours
of Past, Present and
Future love.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    'allowing we to'
    `I think you either meant 'me' or 'us'

    'as we lay to rest
    for eternity
    by each others side.'
    `To be honest this was a part of the poem that really brought me down. Everything was so original until I read this, this was really cliche and I think you could do better. Maybe a really unique metaphor would be better here.

    A interesting poem. I loved the colors you used and how you related them to something about love. This is probably my favorite format, the short lines that flow so beautifully. I loved your thoughts in this write, the only problem I had was that part I highlighted and commented on for being too cliche. Otherwise a well written poem. I enjoyed it. :]

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