Rebirth (Haiku Chain)

A charming set of haiku's. Just what we need after such a severe winter.

Very evocative of spring - and summer. I'm sorry to see it go - Seems like it only just got here!

Its like the begining of life..starting all over
again..nicely written with vivid images...good
write!

^Spring rains renewing,
washing away winter's grime,
rebirthing all things.^

What beautiful picture painting imagery to start off the piece.

^Flowers are blooming,
presenting colors,
brightening landscape.^

The second line has only 5 syllables and should have 7.

^Birds, bees, butterfiles,
scurrying about their work,
giving us beauty.^

Nature sure is beautiful. Soul cleansing, refreshing and relaxing and that is the feelI get from this piece. Nice job!

Beautiful work, I loved how you said the flowers brightened up the landscape, that was my favorite line :) Well done yet again!