Shall Thee Expel Mercy?

by Poet on the Piano   Sep 8, 2009


O' Goddess of Jealousy,
must thee so heartily bequeath
thine eyes of flaming ice and frigid fire?

O' Mentor of Shadows,
must thee so cunningly seek
envy midst the aging wandering spirits?

O' Daughter of Thunder,
must thee so lustfully demand
extinction amongst all of thy fere's?

O' Creator of Wind,
must thee so forcefully strike
kindhearted judgement with thy mayhem?

O' Goddess of Jealousy,
release from thy wilting victims
the inclination to act resentfully.

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  • 9 years ago

    by LadyLk

    I think I quit writing!! My poems are honestly nothing compared to what I am reading!! I love how you're so young yet so witty. Impressive!! You will make it far in life with these skills! You are going in my favourite authors!! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    Very well done. I do agree with some of the other comments. Your use of some of the "Worde of Olde," is enjoyable. "Pray tell, your visions of wonderment, and lightment, do agree with jovial constitution, m'Lady." I admire your talent.

  • 9 years ago

    by Corinne

    This is good, but thine and thee and thou is really hackneyed and overdone, and old fashioned, and you don't always use them correctly - No one writes poetry like this anymore.

  • 9 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    That was beautiful! And the win is well deserved.
    I love the Old English style; I do it myself. I have one suggestion.
    Shouldn't your title be "Shalt Thou Expel Mercy?" It sounds more accurate to me, but then again, just a suggestion :)

    5/5!

  • 9 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I read this a few times why I didn't comment before I'm not sure. I do that at times get lost in a poem not really knowing what to say.
    But anyway, you have been on my favorite list since I joined. Your poems are beyond simple but complex and enjoyable.
    Congrats on your win, you deserved it a millions times over
    *hugs*

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