Symphony of soul...

by kelleyana   Sep 11, 2009


Observing the cloudless blue sky that gleamed its light on me,taking my heart to the right direction it always wants to be. Its warmth quiver the mood and my humor a pure delight.

Sitting on the shore, while my feet blissfully sinks in the sand,ignoring that behind me sitting my future dream man. Our eyes came in contact and absorbed each others hearts. Before saying a single word, I know its pure love from the very start.

Suddenly a wave of desire swept me off my feet,
when he smiled with warmth and proffered his hand to meet. With such a heat no wonder its summer time, lazy days and hot nights, the temperature rise keeping our moods alive.

With time love flourishes our hearts and we harvest all loveliest flowers of our souls,and through our affection this eternal light that shine from above reminds us that our souls were destined to be together and since
We found each other, our stream of lights flows together and a single shines our united beings.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisitely Penned, A Splendid and Fanciful Write!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    I thought it was really hmm... to find a word for it would be hard. The one that is most closest to beautiful...yet even more beautiful...like the beautiful of the beautifulest. If that makes sense. 5/5. Keep up good work. =]

  • 14 years ago

    by Samuel Dimafelix

    I like to comment, but theres no more i can add. But to keep it up.

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Since some of the lines rhyme, maybe you would want to seperate your stanzas into four line verses ? It would make it a little easier to read . And there are also a few grammar mistakes .. But thats a minor detail. I really like the content of the poem as well as your wording , you make it very easy to relate to , but also very personal . Very well done , 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was a lovely poem dear, I felt that you put alot of emotions into and told a very common story. I don't read many love poems but I enjoyed this one. It was done well and it wasn't sappy and cliche. I love the imagery and your original ideas. A very strong poem. Keep it up hun. Nik

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