Until We Meet Again

by ReBecca   Oct 2, 2009


Until We Meet Again

I miss the sound of your laughter,
The sheer intoxication of your voice.
Gone from me
Without a choice.

I spend my time
Amidst smiles and tears.
Gripped with memories.
Oh this pain sears!

Crushing me.
Leaving me battered and weak.
Incapacitating love felt
At this highest peak.

It happened so fast!
Slamming into me like a tidal wave.
Used to think I was so strong.
Now I don’t feel very brave.

This is like dying.
Unexacting grief is what I feel.
My heart taken
Against my will.

ReBecca Sanchez

*Until we meet again Boo*

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  • 14 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    This is beautiful, something I can really relate to being seperated from someone you love. I really liked the flow, and the imagery was beautiful. Hmm looked like a stormy beach in my head anyways great job.. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Nee

    Rebecca..well..that was a little bit off the flow.
    I didn't really like the rhyme, it felt so forced.
    The title wasn't that captivating either.

    "This is like dying.
    Unexacting grief is what I feel.
    My heart taken
    Against my will."
    ^
    I don't think this unrhymed stanza was supposed to be here, made the flow more forced. It felt like you couldn't rhyme at the end so you had to give it a shot wih free verse.

    The capitalized letter at the beginning of the lines weren't all necessary, some of them was completing the lines so..

    Write on (:

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