Strongest

by iFallToPieces   Oct 8, 2009


When I'm not with you,
I dream of your smile.
I dream to hold you,
In my arms for awhile.

When I'm with you,
I get weak in the knees,
The sound of your voice,
Makes me at ease.

I dream of your touch,
Your lips on mine,'
The electricity between us,
Is so devine.

When your eyes meet mine,
It's such an uplifting rush,
I'm starting to think,
This is much more than a crush.

Your smile leaves me breathless,
your embrace makes me melt,
There's no doubt that this,
Is the strongest I've ever felt.

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  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Now its perfect
    good choice of words in the 2nd stanza
    as i said before. beautiful and unbelievable

  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    Yea. If you could fix the 2nd stanza itd be perfect.
    But guess what
    STILL 5/5 MATERIAL
    Beautiful and unbelievable