And So I give Thanks To You And Bare My Soul To You

by Ray Smallshaw   Oct 13, 2009


And so I give thanks to you and bare my soul to you,
As with out you I would have no soul as I would be dead

So I must show you just how much you mean to me,
My day must start with you or I am nothing,

My heart will only kick start after a word, kiss or touch off you,
Then I know there is a heaven here on earth,

You see, you are the angel that proves it,
I hear angelic hosts when my eyes touch you,

Your head is haloed with the brightest ring of light,
In fantasy I can see your angel's wings,

As they flutter my heart in delight and Love,
You are my life's anchor and my steadfast home,

So my soul is yours as is my all as without you
I am a nonentity,

And so I give thanks to you and bare my soul to you.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Katherine

    The only thing I have to say that she's pretty lucky to have someone who expresses there love the way you do. The way you describe the love and the affection you have are profound and deeply touching. Well written. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    I understand that this poem was coming from a heart full of love as it was expressed calmly and without any pretense.

    However, i would like to point out some areas where i think some changes are necessary. This is just my opinion though:-)

    And so I give thanks to you and bare my soul to you,
    As with out you I would have no soul as I would be dead
    ^^The repetition of "you" was actually not necessary here.

    In fantasy I can see your angelâ??s wings,
    You are my lifeâ??s anchor and my steadfast home,

    ^^Please recheck the foreign font :D

    Overall, This was a cute dedication and a sweet note to someone special.

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