Dreams

by Kuro   Oct 28, 2009


When the light fades to dark
Then the truth can be seen
Once the light blinds
It leaves a dark dream

From the darkness eyes appear
Their faces invisible and unclear
Voices mumble but I cannot hear
My curiosity suddenly turns to fear

Awaken to have my vision gray
Colors of the rainbow begin to decay
Lifeless the world has become
The feeling of happiness, now is numb

Darkness returns with a clear face
Beautiful, radiant I begin to embrace
The darkness now resides within me
A mind of its own, controlling entity

Consumed by the evil within
I try to forget, and then I pretend
Numb, blind and desperately cold
Strangled by the darkness's choke hold

From this dream I cannot awake
Its all too real, I hesitate
Is my life worth it, I debate
Ultimately I succumb to my fate

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  • 14 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    The stanza mentioned by Bad Habits is my fave. You have a great sence of vocabulary. I think I'll be reading more of your work. Awsome write.

  • 14 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    I wrote a poem similar to this but its about never wanting to wake up from a good dream.
    I really liked this a lot

    From the darkness eyes appear
    Their faces invisible and unclear
    Voices mumble but i cannot hear
    My curiosity suddenly turns to fear

    Critisism= I think "suddenly" threw me off a bit. But if it works for you then keep it ;)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sadespair

    Wow, now this one I love.
    "Somewhere over the rainbow"
    ^ that threw me off at first but it works I like how you wrote. you definetly are getting the hang of it. (:

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