by Nomad Being Oct 28, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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My life was a wreck, and oceans beyond me had reasons to scream |
by Suri dawn
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Love this! Great job! I love how you brought it all together with the last line! You are a great writer! |
by Rusheena
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Nice, I like the rhyming style and metaphors:) |
by Wishmaster
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Not bad, it was pretty good. Some parts were "sketchy" but I still got the point. Enjoyable read |
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Amazing free flow |