Whenever I See Someone Cry

by Nomad Being   Apr 3, 2011


I looked at the cloud raining under the clear sky
Tears of happiness or sadness, undetermined
Trying to hide in light, the pearls so precious
But where are those on whom you always rely?

Uncertain thought is what the question implies
Yet another diamond smuggles to walk the aisle
Aware of the light and aware of my presence
Question begins to linger, the reasons behind

Perhaps the story flashes in those frozen eyes,
Tears already dry and the feelings compiled
Wind begins to push its stillness, I'm learning to fly
It begins to move ahead in silence, yet a perfect reply!!!

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  • 13 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    A well penned piece you have written here. Your opening definitely created this scene of loneliness. It's extremely sad when we see, ones tears flow so heavy, and not know why they cry so.

    I do have a couple of suggestions though in this line.
    "Question beings to linger, the reasons behind"
    ^ was "beings" suppose to be "begins"?

    And this line
    "Wind begin to push its stillness, I'm learning to fly"
    ^ I think this line would flow a little better if "begin" was "begins"

    Those were all my suggestions. Overall this piece is definitely a work of art.
    Take care

  • 13 years ago

    by mira

    Lovely the words are so true and sensetive
    i like it:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    WOW! This is good. Haha u should be glad u haven't seen me cry!

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