They Call It A Breakdown

by FindingHarmonyInYurCries   Nov 28, 2009


In the middle of something
I wont be able to complete
I feel my heart sinking
Through my body to my feet

It hits the floor and shatters
Then I suddenly feel hollow
I start staring into space
Awaiting the inevitable tears to follow

So, go ahead, put your life on hold
And watch this b**** breakdown
See the emptiness in my eyes
As everything blurs now

See the first tear that falls
And lands atop my heart
Watch as I look for help
And realise I failed from the start

See my life fall apart
Once more because of me
Watch me plead to the lord above
Just stop this, set me free!

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  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow...this is very powerful. I loved it. I think it was well written, didnt seem forced, it just flowed nicely and i liked that. Great write, keep it up. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow...this is very powerful. I loved it. I think it was well written, didnt seem forced, it just flowed nicely and i liked that. Great write, keep it up. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Hologram

    I'm not God, but I'm trying
    My hardest to set yu free ...

    My only hope is that maybe one
    Day, yu'll feel no more pain.

    Great write, once again
    5/5
    x

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