Broken

by Caitlyn   Dec 2, 2009


What if I leave everything behind,
Forget about everything that was mine.
Start a new life some where else,
Just be alone.. all by myself.
Go some place far away,
Some where that I can just be me.
No worries, no nothing..
Just me and all my broken hopes and dreams.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Caitlyn

    Thank you guys for all the kind comments :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessie

    I like how short it was. It seemed like it just came from your heart, where poetry should come from.

    You should check out my new one. "pouring raine"
    lol its the complete opposite:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Poetic Justice

    I like your flow, it was very sad but i sense hope in those words. Great Job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by cici89

    Good Idea... I wish it was possible. You lack a little bit of flow throughout. Good job though

    suicidalkansas

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