My first love

by Hopeless Romantic   Dec 11, 2009


Never knew what this would be like
those butterflies fluttered inside
my heart melt like chocolate
memory so vivid
i could never forget

you called out my name
but i didnt know who
i kept going
my eyes in the crowd but i walked away
until many days passed
and you finally introduced yourself at last
and with the first sight of you
you made it known that we were forever

you've always kept me smiling
i loved the way you said my name
talking to me on the phone at night
it was just me and you, no games

with the first kiss i was scared
with the first kiss the fire inside flared
i tried to deny it
with so much past hurt
i tried to run away
but me you couldn't desert

you hugged me tighter
wiped away my tears
kissed me passionately
and doused the flame of my fears

now i know
what true love is
it'll never let you go
no matter how much rough it gets
claiming me he said "my first love"

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  • 13 years ago

    by Hopeless Romantic

    Thank u i appreciate your comment

  • 13 years ago

    by ChrisT

    I liked most of the words you chose for this poem, but it was a little hard to follow. Follow as in the story was all over and didn't exactly have a flow.

    From an emotional stand point however, first love is one I'll never forget.

  • 14 years ago

    by David

    Sweet :)

    I admire anyone who looks for love in these times. I think it's great you found it.

  • 14 years ago

    by Captivat3d

    That is how first love feels at FIRST, at least for me but mine ended badly :/ but yeah great work :]