I Only Have Eyes For You.

by Courageous Dreamer   Dec 11, 2009


Your honey coated personality
captivated me from the taste
of hello when my ocean blue
eyes melted into yours,
and the wave of your lips
swept fervidly across mine,
furnishing our hearts
with everlasting delight.

Your smooth hands prompting
desires as you caressed my
arms with a soothing touch
of undying adoration.
Intoxicated, my eyes bid
the night adieu as I fell
into your presence swallowing
all reluctance, anchoring
me with unconditional support.

Written for a club contest.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    Your honey coated personality
    ^^^
    Great opening line! Love the insertion of honey coated instead of the normal (sweet, warm ect)
    Gives the reader (a taste) of the person to which your poem is centered around.

    Your smooth hands prompting
    desires as you caressed my
    arms with a soothing touch
    of undying adoration.
    ^^
    Love is a feeling many writers struggle with to describe what exactly it feels like. But I think you have described it perfectly here. The sizzle it gives us when the one we love does something as simple as caress our arm.
    Now that to me is LOVE!

    Loved this read and love the title.
    I Only Have Eyes For You
    ^^^
    Something we all desire in our relationship.

    Beautiful read !

  • 16 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    This is absolutely beautiful!!!! keep writing!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Beautiful is all I can say, I could imagine this passionate love burning even further with each word I read. Great job, keep it up!

    ~MaryAnne

    Merry Christmas!

  • 16 years ago

    by Daniel Rutter

    Very deep, very nice.
    4/5
    What I would give for something like this eh?

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