Christmas [Looks a lot like blood]

by BlueEyedMystery   Dec 13, 2009


Moves in-
creeping.
Weeping
sweet girl.
Twirl-twirl
'round a
lie.

Ghost
of a white
christmas
past.

Whisper-
slither. Into
a little girl.
Twirl-twirl
Goodbye
sweet tiny
lies.

Ghost
of a foggy
winter's
past.

Frightful-
biting snow.
Let it glow.
Stabing-
ripping skin.
Where have
you been?

Ghost
of a bloody
haunted
past.

Red
on
white.

Let the
angel's
sing.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I've read this before...but it wasn't as cool than. Now that this is like my third time reading it I can see how different it is. I mean wow...what a clever and creative piece. I love how it flows and how different the rhyme is. It's almost like a story, but not quite. I also like how you took something so simple and overused like Christmas and made it something new and refreshing. That takes some real talent...not many people could do that. But you're you so you did a wonderful job with it :) I had a great time reading this. Really got me thinking about new things. Great work as always Nik :)

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