Alison Part 2

Seems like a sort of repeat of part 1, but still great.

Very well written, its great how you continued and kept it the same length as the first. Excellently written with beautiful wording. Two favorite verses were:

"Ignite the passion that shall never depart,
Spark my daydream with opportunity."

"Candlelight glistens over your rose like eyes,
An unblemished & immaculate smile,"

I especially love second verse.

Just one tiny note if I had to give you one: I would suggest spelling out "&", this has always been a thing that has bothered me, but do as you will.

"Another sonnet for the exquisite sweetheart,
Lingering gasps will expose longful honesty,
Ignite the passion that shall never depart,
Spark my daydream with opportunity.
Oppose my chagrin with sugar & spice,
Note, I'm always here for advice."

I liked the thought put into this, and as I was taking in each line, I pondered the meaning which is why I give this piece such high praise. You have some really inspiring lines written here, well done.

"Candlelight glistens over your rose like eyes,
An unblemished & immaculate smile,
Raindrops keep falling within our sight,
Excuse me for my versatile style,
You'll be my Aphrodite tonight."

This was equally good to the stanza above, and I liked how you in this stanza, gave more descriptions of the scenery and what she appears to look like. The last line is what I have looked forward to, and you did not disappoint. I thought that was very sweet and brilliant to call her your Aphrodite.

Best wishes in the future!

~MA

That was a brilliant write... the imagery is brilliant... your feelings so well expressed... and beautifully worded... the whole write is captivating...
an awesome poem I must say...

You really know how to make your poems sparkle, especially with the imagery.