Outside (Song)

This was really touching....it's a sadly familiar feeling. Sometimes it seems like something is so good it will never end..but then it does and we're left with an indescribable feeling of emptiness just sitting and waiting to wake up. Excellent job portraying those feelings. You really are a talented writer.

When i read this, i tried to visualize the guitar. (because the link did not work for me) and i really liked it. i only wish i could have heard you play :(

i play guitar too and i sometimes try to write lyrics too the many riffs i eventually come up with. its harder than it looks.

nice job
~Kuro

Joe
Nice job on your lyrics. I tried to listen to the link you provided but it wouldn't open for me. I enjoyed reading your song.
Take care
Cindy

I would also like to hear this sung to the music in the link. It is a beautiful love song very well written, and you play so well

Have to listen to the clip later...as for the poem/song it flowed well and I can imagine you playing your guitar singing this song..good work :)