Bittersweet Melody

by Shinobi   Apr 11, 2010


Where oceans once flowed , sand remains
Thus our body decays to a new reality
Bleeding away, what it no longer contains
Withering from this shell of mortality

Life is a choice, not for us to decide
Taken away by desperation and rage
Like a dreadful tower, it will stand
Locking us tight in a deep dark cage

Air pierces the lungs with each breath
No remorse for a soul, no salvation
Escaping the horror of his wrath
Running from his sweet redemption

In death we shall be at peace
That's what they use to say
Laying our heads, resting at ease
In a bittersweet melody, we decay

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  • 13 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Once again I'm not entirely sure why you switched the rhyme scheme and missed a couple along the way. Second and third stanzas threw me off big time when opposite lines didn't rhyme...not even close. Poem isn't terrible and has some relevance to everyone or should, but I gave this an honest 4/5 Needs some work

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem is awesome. I would not change a thing. The poem has everything I love in a poem rhythm, rhyme reflecting though prvoking depth