Neverending,The Endless ; Emptiness

by Yakari Gabriel   May 2, 2010


So,She was like water
heating on a hot stove
-Boiling..
Forgotten,
Gone with the Wind

Found,When it was to late
She condensed
she was far like smoke
-Useless
You'll Never find her again

Up in a gray Cloud
She Remained
-Hiding,
though too heavy she was,
Like Rain
She poured in from above
-Again here.

And So Again
Ended up,on a hot stove
-Boiling,
praying,hoping
But no!
Forgotten,Again.
-Gone

Her life,is like
The
Useless Story within history
Never-ending,Empty,Endless
The Never Ending,Endless
-Emptiness.

her.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Lettredufront

    I thought it was amazing.

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Nee

    I like it :-) though the form of stanzas really confused me..
    and I suggest you correct the capitalized letters in the lines.

    Keep it up =)

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    Yaki :] Your every poem always holds beauty and reflective meaning. You have a lot of potential in you my dear young poet. However just a little careful the way you structure them. For instance, in my humble opinion, i dont think it was necessary to captilize most of the words within the poem. Just my opinion though.

  • 14 years ago

    by hayden

    That was really good, it spoke to me on a personal note. Kepp up the good work!

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