Who Am I?

by Daisy if you do   May 14, 2010


Stirred the cobble, tried my best
From host of one, to many guests
To dispel this beast consuming me
For once to live life merrily
Yet in my stupor, folly thoughts
controlled the whys, what ifs and nots
Somehow wandered down passion's path
To sip on pain from love's true wrath
This wicked, evil, obscene affair
Clutched deeper than my soul could bear
My wounded heart, ached in agony
Still even then, drank bitter tea
From tainted blood that fills the vein
A poisoned kiss from her I gained
No man- No spirit- Nor Death himself
Can claim the grief that I have felt
From mother's womb to beneath the stone
I lived this life... but I lived alone

Copyright
Melinda Kay Carpenter
5/13/10

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  • 13 years ago

    by Ross H Bruce

    Wow!!! very powerful indeed.

  • 13 years ago

    by quiet lullaby

    This is beautiful, and sad and deep and everything i wish i could convey.
    Its a truly remarkable piece of work.
    Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    On a more technical note:

    "the why's, what if's and not's...."

    do not need the apostrophes here
    as they are plurals rather than possessives...

    otherwise...
    this really is a rather brilliant delivery..
    enough imagery for a one-act play, I think...

    Thank You immensely for your amazing words re 'mid-September'...
    reflecting exactly what one could hope for....

    I'm just passin' thru briefly again in, hopefully, a timely, appropriate way.....
    great-grandbaby calls often...;~)
    still got diapers to change...chuckle...
    yay!

  • 13 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    "Who Am I?"

    I'm thinking: Dixiedaisy's baby......

  • 13 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Good to have you back DD, this is a profound write, seeming a taunt of some past experience and a darkness that I can not put a finger on, But I am reminded of a Thespian. Peace and Blessings

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