Without You

by Sunshine   Aug 5, 2010


Without you..I see lines of fire in my brain
I feel sadness, depression,I live unbearable pain
Without you I hear the smile of life crying loudly
where the ears of a sad fate listens calmly holding
the broken promises about the untrue happiness..

Without you I see a heart that's broken, left
between the dust of the worlds biggest desert
As the sun shines over my burnt hearts' skin
how painful, shameful it seems to be, for without
you makes the biggest cursed sin

Without you..I see cold nights singing the saddest
tunes,of which the sky thunder harshly for Its desire
and the stars shine the lightening of Its fire
where I shed the fears of how cruel without you is..
For without you means I die, I fall, I end and tire

Without you I see life as a dark hole with not a slit
shed of light..I see not the shiny days but do imagine
the unkind dark nights, full of horror drowned by tears.
Without you I see my heart pumping pounding all these fears

Without you I see the world a scary tail that ends dead..
..I read black words of a horrible spooky book
which best to be left unread..for without you means
I will never move ahead in life but hole my place instead
oh! without you is just worse than what I have ever said

Old poem :)--Written 2010-02-10 kl 14:05

By: Rania Moallem

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  • 12 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    "Without you I see the world a scary tail that ends dead..
    ..I read black words of a horrible spooky book"
    liked these line though the whole of it is impact full :) nice

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Your poem has a voice and the feelings behind each line is very much felt and understood..well written...take care.

  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    These are definitely real, true feelings you would feel when you're without someone that you love. It's such an unbearable feeling....

  • 13 years ago

    by chind

    "Without you..I see lines of fire in my brain
    I feel sadness, depression,I feel unbearable pain"

    "Without you..I see cold nights singing the saddest
    tunes"
    - loved these lines, they portray such imagery ...

    this piece was beautiful! i cant believe you didnt put it up sooner! good work :D i can see how it kind of reminds me of midsummer nights view ... haha :) loved it!

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