Passion

by Jim McMillen the man within   Aug 24, 2010


8-20-10

Come walk with me awhile
Let's explore the pleasure of our comfort zone.
Share with me your smile.
The most alluring I've ever known.

Tell me of the things you need
Lay your words of wanting , softly in my ear
Release your passions till their all freed
It's all my heart can hear.

Press your lips so sweet to mine
Show me you've wanted all the love I've shown
Two hungry souls have now entwined
I'm lost in the comfort of your pleasure zone

Pull my body closer to you
Don't stop, were on the brink
Both set free at the petting zoo
Of our animal instinct.

Theme song for This poem
Moon song--Joe Byrd and The Field Hippies

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6cFykQavHj4

Jim McMillen
From My Collection
The Benefit Of Light
Copyright 2007

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  • 13 years ago

    by quiet lullaby

    This is so beautiful. I've read a few of your poems and this one is so amazingly lovely to read. It is perfect.

  • 13 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Woh.. passionate, beautiful, sensational! :) A great write.. I loved it :))

    Well Done Jim !

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Such a sweet, soft and an alluring sensual
    write! Very nicely penned!

  • 13 years ago

    by Lana

    A very tender write. It had just the right ingredients to make a beautiful verse. Passionate without being overdone. I enjoyed this one.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Passionate..
    tender
    lovely
    expressed deeply
    i love it Jim really

    5/5