Midnight Madness Part 4: "Postmen All Knock Twice"

by Ronald Edwards   Aug 30, 2010


The night dragged on without event
my pulse raced nonetheless.
The hard wood chair gnarled in my back
as I sat motionless.

Should I retire, get some sleep,
and rest my weary head?
Across the room a pillow called
to lie upon its bed.

Struggling with grogginess,
my eyes becoming slits.
I wondered if the Midnight hours
had scared them from their wits.

Heavy footsteps reached my room
a lone knock on the door.
The muffled voice said he had mail
but would not say whom for.

Something was wrong for no one knew
that I was waiting here.
I heard him breathing in the hall,
the peephole I did peer.

My visitor had come and gone,
a phantom langolier.
Was he friend or enemy
or someone I should fear?

I summoned all the strength I had,
the door swung open wide.
Down on the ground there sat a box
To: Jekyll From: Mr. Hyde

I took the package in with me
against my own advice.
The messenger was ominous
cause postmen all knock twice.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    Thanks you guys, there is so much more to come, Midnight really shows Jekyll what he is all about, no good for sure, stay tuned (evil laugh)

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I summoned all the strength I had,
    the door swung open wide.
    Down on the ground there sat a box
    To: Jekyll From: Mr. Hyde

    waaoooh...this part sounded different..reminded me of a story about Jekull and Hyde...the drug man who was a doc or something like that but his features turned ugly due to drinking or drugs.. i cant remember.. so he played to characters..

    well done
    i love IT
    :D5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    THis is like watching a movie..very descriptive and interesting too! Enjoyed this write :)