by Sunshine Sep 3, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Meeting your eyes, I sense such a beautiful mystery, |
by Just Sierra
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Absolutely love this. Haven't been on this site in forever but I kinda felt a poetry mood come onto me again. Your poem is great inspiration! Thank you! |
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WoW! this poem is amazing... Extremely well-written! I love your metaphors and comparison... they're so well put together! |
by chind
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Wow! that was amazing naza ! I loved it! How you are able to create such amazing pieces one after another just awes me. I love the vivid images in this piece, and every line was amazing !! |
by silvershoes
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You really have a knack for poetry! I'm impressed. The last stanza seems to lose flow but that could be my poor reading skills. A very lovely write from you. Thanks for sharing. |
by Lady Nik
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Well it would seem everyone has left you long comments about how awesome this piece is but I only have one thing to say. WOW! Nik [: |