Mother Nature(Triloet)

by Jad   Sep 21, 2010


Reveling Her workmanship complete,
as we stand in awe wonder.
With Her caring winds but unforgiving heat,
reveling Her workmanship complete.
Nourishing the small and meek,
unleashing Her wrath tearing all asunder.
Revealing Her workmanship complete
As we stand in awe wonder.

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A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, capital
letters representing the repeated lines.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    Jad all these fancy poem configs are not to my taste yet this is perhaps one of the best triolets I have read. So instead of puting it down the toilet I gave it an excellent 5/5
    Ray S

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Your work reminds me a lot of my own . No wonder I like it hahahaha. All kidding aside great works going on in your head

  • 13 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A Triolet?!.. I love it, I love it, I LOVE IT!! HaHa.

    Austin... youre full of surprises :) A MARVELOUS poem. Bravo...

    ..... I love the repeating line " As we stand in awe wonder" :)

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