Not With You

by january friend   Oct 18, 2010


If you could read my mind,
I couldn't look at you anymore.
The way you look at me,
Just makes me break more.
Maybe if we didn't talk,
Quite the way we do.
Maybe if we just didn't meet,
I could forget you.
I know it's not right,
I know it's not even true.
It's just the feeling I get,
When I'm not with you.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    A very good peice!
    i found this poem very sad, and something i can definatly relate too, got a friend in a similar situation atm so may show it to him aswel..

    i enjoyed the flow, almost rolled of the tounge

    short but sweet, i liked it!

    keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Aww that was a really good poem...it really showed how you felt....

    it was sincere and genuine .... it's a torn feeling huh? but keep writing

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Great . you dont want to love that person anymore so you dont want to be with them because when you are with them you fall for them. thats what i got from it

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wonderful piece. Great descriptions fabulous word choice.

  • 12 years ago

    by Exostosis

    A beautiful piece. Reading it was a delight because of the fluid composition. Short and precise.

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