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You would have to write something completely amazing in a poem with 5 lines in order to get a 5 from me. I don't always look to quality of the poem as much as I do effort and time. This piece just has little effort and even less time put into it. I would have given it a 3 but I won't down vote so if you want the rating message me.

Short, but very powerful. I love the rhyming and the overall flow of this poem. It's crisp and to the point.

This is really beautiful and very emotional. Well done, 5/5. Em

A very emotional piece in so few words. I think you expressed yourself well here and really made it clear that you were hurt. Keep it up. Nik

Short but awesome work... Full with sad feedings from start to end...
Great job at all