Falling Apart

by Lost Dreamer   Oct 19, 2010


We're falling apart,
drifting away.
I'm confused, on why we pretend to be Ok.

Something you love,
is always going to be taken away someday.
Everyday is the same,
long and restless.
Life is pointless to me.

You can't stop yourself,
from crying day and day.
The day we saw each other,
nothing was the same.
You walked right by me.
How can you and I forget it?

Our eyes were locked,
and our heads had met,
the sparks were there, from the start.
Somehow, someway,
They all disappeared.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Heather

    My fav lines as well! . . Enjoyed reading it was was awesome, I'm very moved.

  • 11 years ago

    by AngelOfDarkness

    This is amazing i like it alot thanks for commenting on my poem.. by the way ime brokenbellas cousin

  • 11 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Wow girl. This was so beautiful and amazing and so very pure. My favorite part was,
    "Our eyes were locked,
    and our heads had met,
    the sparks were there, from the start.
    Somehow, someway,
    They all disappeared. "

    I LOVED THAT PART. And the beginning.

    Amazing job girly.
    KEEP WRITING!

    Kisses!
    -Hannah

  • 11 years ago

    by Simikiel

    This is amazing. you have a way with words that lets emotion flow through and speak to your reader. thank you for taking the time to share this beautiful piece of art with us.

  • 11 years ago

    by Seph

    Hi Lost Dreamer,

    I love your sad poems. Some of them can be relate to me.

    You're poems give me strength and power to realize that the break up wasn't my fault. It was his fault.

    Thank you so much.

    Kind regards,

    Seph