Coke Or Tea

by Kuro   Nov 8, 2010


Coca-cola, made of man
drink it fast, buy it now!
commercialize for profit
sugar high, addictive low

Jasmine tea, made of earth
drink it hot, drink it slow
contemplate your thoughts
spiritual high, cleansing woe

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  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Give me a strong cup of coffee and I'm happy. cool write :-)

  • 13 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Haven't heard about jasmine tea but i love drinking tea... another way to stay awake during office hours :P
    wonderful write. Nice comparison made between coca cola and tea.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jad

    Well, this certainly puts a twist on poems that I have read. You did a wonderful job describing the drinks and telling how you could drink them. A unique poem that was pretty much flawless. Great job and keep writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I like how you took two things from life and compared them, the good and the bad. Well done.

  • 13 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Woh.. Loved the adrenaline in this poem.. :) and also the calming effect! ,, Im away to buy some herbal tea :] haha. A great write! Well Done Ben :))

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