Nana! This was amazing! Your words are so lovely, painting so many beautiful images in my head. I think your second stanza would have to be my favourite. Such lovely work ! WELL DONE GIRL!

This is very deep and well written I would not change a thing

Nana, this was incredible and I think very beautiful even though it is a sad type of poem. The meaning behind this poem is very moving and I love the way you went about describing everything. It gave the world a beautiful imagery that painted a picture in my mind of each scene as I read the poem. Also the emotions in this poem were heartbreaking and very creative and unique.

"Where I cross thorny lands with bare feet;
that lost sensation though bleeding
tokens of bloody tears..
For the snow beneath to sip."

This is my favorite stanza as it gives a wonderful picture of how I was saying that your imagery is beautiful and piercing. This poem was all in all a great work from you and though I like to see happier poems from you this one still spoke to me a lot of how we wake up each morning and what our prespective is on the world. Great job and keep writing.

This brought really clear images to my mind, I really like this
The way I imagine someone just walking through thing.
Very deep
And also very creative nice way to twist around things.
Its just breathtaking
Very well done hun ~

WOW! Beautiful! I absolutely love this. I'm adding this poem to my favorites.

The only problem I had was... I actually don't understand this line:
"Howling 360 times whenever I wake up."
I don't know if I'm being blonde :} and totally missing something known as common sense but it just didn't make sense.

But I honestly am sitting here trying to figure out what part was my favorite and I couldn't choose. You did an amazing job! The images you created in my head are beautiful. I am actually an artist and I would like to draw this:

-Somewhere, at the edges of a wintry cave;
deep inside my world's dreary forests

where I cross thorny lands with bare feet;
that lost sensation though bleeding
tokens of bloody tears..
For the snow beneath to sip.
-If I ever do draw it I'll post it and message you to see it. lol

Merveilleux!

5/5

Sure dear :) thanks a lot.
and 360 represents the number of the days per year ..as in :

360 days = one year.
So what I was trying to reflect was the length and the how each day of my life is being cruelly spent .

Loved it:)x x x

Nana, I can hear you, I can feel your pain and I wish to God I had an answer, but I don't..at times I feel like He has a plan, but often, when I see how much sadness, pain and suffering there is in this world, I start to doubt. There is no end to the suffering and there will never be. The only thing that makes life worth living is the love we share with friends and family and the love for God.

* huge comforting hug*

5/5 Ingrid