Stars .

by C0tt0nxCand3h   Nov 16, 2010


The stars up in the sky,
are shining really bright.
Just like your eyes,
what a beautiful sight.

The stars up in the sky,
they remind me of you.
So perfect and shining,
if only you knew.

The stars up in the sky,
sometimes seem close enough to touch.
I want you to know,
that i love you so much.

The stars up in the sky,
they are so far away.
Look into my eyes,
and promise you'll stay.

The stars are so beautiful,
but they don't compare to you.
to me; they are pure perfection,
and you are too.

Written; 11.16.10

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  • 13 years ago

    by C0tt0nxCand3h

    Thank you.(:

  • 13 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Simply pure and amazing. I loved it so much.
    Keep writing! I give it a 5/5 !

    Kisses!
    -Hannah

  • 13 years ago

    by Jessie

    Well done, again seems a little forced.

    "The stars up in the sky,
    they remind me of you.
    So perfect and shining,
    if only you knew."

    With this stanza, "If only you knew" doesn't seem to fit, what should he know?

    aside from that, good job:)

    Jessie

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    :) when you are in love everything around you reminds you of that person..a nice read.

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