Winter like a Hollow Hand

by sibyllene   Jan 13, 2011


It's the season closest
if anything
to the stale air of
an empty waiting room,
housing nothing but the slick quiet ghosts
of different shades of fear.
There's that dried blood red of desperation,
those treacle-colored leaves of trepidation,
that putrid paint yellow of a handful
of lost hopes, clinking
to the bottom of a well.

Winter like the coldest
dawning of the sun, that
scintillating
scarring wash of snow, those
blue-winged shadows and that
biting sun-deaf glare.

Birds tangle in my hair and
scratch my temples with their claws-
migrate, migrate, and I'm
clipping off their wings in a salty tumble
of longing.

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  • 13 years ago

    by Christopher Wry

    Interestin but to me the last verse dose not fit to well.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Darkly Depressive and
    BRILLIANT.

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win :)

  • 13 years ago

    by silvershoes

    I take it you don't like winter? :) I don't either... it's depressing much like your poem. I must say though, you are the queen of similes, metaphors, and analogies. The Queen! The first idea in which you compared winter to the stale air of an empty waiting room = p e r f e c t i o n.

  • 13 years ago

    by The Queen

    Congratulations on a well deserved win!

    A truly beautiful piece of work!