Circumstances

by Sunshine   Apr 1, 2011


The sky is semi swallowed,
and so is my heart
clothed with dreariness,
teased by feral breezes
I shovel the leaves,
but when the wind blows again,
I will let go.

The night leaked,
wearing the dyed native soil
unaccompanied -
I wished for some spotless fire rays,
and soon, we were all dreaming.

by: Rania Moallem

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  • 13 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I'm glad you made the changes you did, they really helped the poem quite a bit I think. I hope you think so as well. Can't really think of anything to say, you have penned some wonderful thoughts.

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Haha actually its cause i edited while u were commenting..no worries XD i appreciated the suggestions both cases

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