Running in the Rain

by Larry Chamberlin   Apr 8, 2011


Like a water paint under the rains
life has colored me in blurs and a swirl,
but there's a certain beauty that remains -
this garden of woven hues is a girl

collab lyrics with Saba

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  • 14 years ago

    by Kiko

    This has some nice colorful images, and I look forward to reading the rest of the song lyrics.

    BTW, "Like a water paint under the rains" would make more sense if it were changed to "like a water painting under the rains."

  • 14 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Interesting work.. it's very refreshing..can't distinguish whether to consider this as one of the simple poems or complex because reading only those lines portray a very huge and various images and emotions.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    No it's just a great imagination

  • 14 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    It's just the chorus

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    If this is 4 lines with so many images and power..
    then I bow for your talent!!

    I am speech-l-e-s-s!!

    AMAZING
    piece!

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