Deathreaper

by La Reina De Corazones   Apr 21, 2011


Time stops
breathing becomes hard
the soul reaper is here for you
it takes your soul back
then time resumes for the souls
that aren't next on his list

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  • 13 years ago

    by Mello193

    This blew my mind

  • 13 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I like this one, it expresses a lot of emotions with no direct mention of them. I can sense pain, waiting, longing, loneliness and depression from your words. Well written, nice, short, clean cut. I only have one comment on this one; in short poems try not to repeat a word more than once; it puts you off the beat or rhythm of the poem.

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