Lies Inside The Truth [Senryu]

by Kuro   Jun 6, 2011


Inside the truth lies.
The truth lies. Truth lies inside.
Lies inside the truth.

Lies, inside the truth...
Lies inside... the truth

~~~Writer's Note~~~
I wrote this to be a play on words. The word "Lies" could refer to "Lay down" or to not tell the truth, but tell a "Lie". The same phrase can be repeated with different emphases to give it a completely different meaning.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    I absolutly loved this poem. I thought the double meaning whammy was great - and you used it well with "lies".

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    What a word play :D
    interesting read :D love how meaning changes :)

  • 14 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I thought this was unique and brilliant! I like how it can mean two different things given the way you read it. Very nicely done.

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    As Cinda said its like a chant to make one's heart ready to speak the truth..good job!

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