Love Melody

by Meme   Jun 27, 2011


When you sing
Season changes to autumn
Then the flowers blossom
And the air goes numb

When you sing
The trees start to sway
Causing a rhythm to play
On the strings of sun ray

When you sing
The clouds start to cry
Rain drops fly nearby
And birds start to reply

When you sing
My breath stops for a while
You just change my lifestyle
And unconsciously I start to smile

When you sing
I become like a kid in a candy store
My request is not something to be ignored
I just keep asking for more and more

When you sing
You raise me so high and above
Until breathing becomes so tough
This is the effect of falling in love

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© Copyright 2011 by: gIrL
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  • 14 years ago

    by nealy

    I love this one

  • 14 years ago

    by Boy

    When you sing
    i feel i am so close to happiness
    i feel the fragrance of your breaths
    -------------------------------------333
    good poem.... its all about love.. pure.. i adore it.

  • 14 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Wat a lovely work once agn ,,,5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    O MY GOD!
    this is Amazing...
    The title was so sweet, then the joyful tone in your words was very very very cute, nd i kept smilling with every new stanza..its very interesting and innocent..

    give me this sense of a fresh love that makes u thrilled excited, over the clouds!
    the love for someone, that you sound like appreciated badly.

    However ofcourse I have a favorite stanza, which is this one:

    When you sing
    My breath stops for a while
    You just change my lifestyle
    And unconsciously I start to smile

    ^^
    I RELATTEEE MHM :P

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    OMG!!!!!.....that is beautiful....

    "You raise me so high and above
    Until breathing becomes so tough
    This is the effect of falling in love"

    That just made me melt!!!! just fantastic :-))

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