Fire and Ice

by White Orchid   Jul 2, 2011


Staring at a photograph
Thinking of your laugh
You made me better
Then I got your letter

Shattered heart is left
With every word I read
Want to go back in time
Every second you were mine

Words one never wishes to hear
Sharp pain bursts through every tear
Forgive me for not letting you speak
Your love I will continue to seek

I forgot what love is, bring it back
Words speak for actions you lack
We were one of the same device
Now we've become like fire and ice

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  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Very well expressed, especially these last lines:
    We were one of the same device
    Now we've become like fire and ice

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    I'm speechless... the last stanza blew me away. It's definitely the best ending to the poem and my favorite stanza. I liked the story behind this poem... the idea that love is given but can be stopped at times... Very relatable as well. Great job hon!

  • 12 years ago

    by tainted melody

    I LOVED THIS POEM!!!!! great job. very personal for being completely made up lol good one.

  • 12 years ago

    by XblackrainbowsX

    I can so relate to that

  • 12 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    I liked how never forgot this person very good keep it up