Impact
by Scott Jul 6, 2011
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Do you? Can you? See that the tentative implications of your endeavors, and how they leave ripples atop the waters of time......... Like a sandstone skipping the lake many, many, many ripples on different spots, all caused from one action and they move outward creating a wake in your path of destruction, without conscious or compassion. |
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14 years ago
by Jenni
The structure may not be what we're used to but i like the fact that it's different. Makes it really unique! The imagery you used underlined your message perfectly and it encourages the reader to think, which i personally like. I rather think about it myself than read someone stating the obvious. I also thought it was good that you actually directed it to the reader by asking 'Do you? Can you?'. I like your way of thinking :)
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14 years ago
To me didn't have a really good flow but tbh it might be cause I'm not used to this sort of poetry you have got talent tho keep it up man
