by Scott Jul 6, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
The taste of your kiss is a sweet reminisce, much like the way I remember each day. |
by Corina
You have expressed your feelings/emotions really well in this poem. It is very well written. |
by alisha
I absolutly love it its obviously filled with lots of emotion its beautiful |
I agree with jenni what an amazing piece hope to see more soon |
by Jenni
Wow.. this is filled with emotions. I liked flow and rhyme and the substance was stunning. This is a really heartfelt poem, though i'd recommend you to present all lines as you did with the third part. I think that'd be more inviting other than that i don't have anything to complain about :) |