Grandpa

I enjoyed reading this and I have to say the last stanza is very powerful and wise

You once told me
that until my heart is
bitten to the core
It will not grow roots
and I will not know how precious
is home.
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It is as if to say that we need to go through the bad things in life so we can know when to appreciate the good.

Well written

x

This was so deep. I like how smooth it went, and how, by the means of flashback, you really got me goosebumps.

amazing

A really metaphorical piece of art, like always.

The personification was good in this poem. that makes the reader about deep thinking and involving themselves. its a nice piece a bit tough for me to understand maybe because the words are beyond my thoughts.

I really liked this, with all your fruity metaphors. :)

The only stanza that seems a bit weak to me is the third stanza, where you repeat "and dream" for a second time. It's like a dream within a dream, which is a bit confusing.

Overall, an excellent write from you.