Take my hand

by Tillra   Jul 29, 2011


Come with me and we shall fly
over the sea and into the sky
Run from the madness of this fight
take my hand and we'll take flight
and We will find a place to call home
together forever, never alone
we'll escape the place of our past
and find a place where we can laugh
away from death and away from war
blood and pain we saw it all
So take my hand and fly away
because here we can not stay.

I'm not sure where we will go
a place to heal a place to grow
a place to run and not to hide
a place to smile and a place to die.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    Good poem i like the flow of this poem i can feel the pain and emotion 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "well escape the place of our past"
    change well to "we'll"

    "and find a place were we can laugh"
    change were to "where"

    "I'm not sure were we will go"
    change were to "where"

    Apart from those spelling errors, it flowed really well. The rhymes were well placed. I love the ending very much. Great poem! 5/5 :)

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by Georgia

    This is sweet, I really enjoyed it 5/5

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