Invisible Worth

by Cinnamonspice   Aug 5, 2011


I am but a weed among the flowers
yet I lend green to the sea of color

A chunk of coal dull and rough
but pressed and polished I sparkle

Cloud of black covering the sun
rendering rain to hydrate the earth

Disgusting spider climbing your wall
feeding on the insects that annoy

Before you judge look deep into the
inner core you might find worth

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  • 14 years ago

    by Decayed

    The message was well delivered!

    I love poems which starts with 'I am but..'

    They make you read till the very end!!

    Interesting, enchanting, amazing :)

  • 14 years ago

    by rg

    Really liked your poem

  • 14 years ago

    by QueenGwen

    Great work! i love the imagry of each line, from weeds to rain clouds, great job. Another great work :)

  • 14 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Connie, you are a little cute philosopher who always gives us lessons in life! :)
    the mesage behind this was awesome, I can even take your last two lines as a quote! can't you see? xD you are a very good writer and you havepassion while penning down your thoughts, good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Liliana

    Awesome, I can totally understand the ideia :) 5/5

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